Tragedy. I wrote this idea out in an email to a friend. Wrote it in gorgeous, bloggy detail. Then I cut it from the email, realizing that she (not a writer) wouldn’t be interested in my theories. Intended to paste it into a blog entry.
But, as life would have it, I got randomized and forgot to paste it…anywhere. So when I finally got to this window, I discovered the computer actually has the link to a website stored in the paste function.
But! It was my brain that thought it up to begin with, so I’ll recreate. Less than spontaneously, but maybe more thought out.
Here’s the concept. Writing has always been considered a two-step event. Writing and then Editing. You write your novel. Then you edit it. Sometimes you edit it over and over again.
But let me pose this theory:
Great writers write in three steps.
Creating. Polishing. Editing.
Yes, those are in the correct order.
Writing is really a combination of creating and polishing. This is where the various “writing styles” come in – some people create an outline first, then fill it in with details. Others write copiously, then cut and rearrange. No matter how you come up with your fully functional narrative – that’s your goal in the creative phase. A narrative draft that is “finished”. That’s what people mean when they say “I finished the first draft of my novel.” It means, “I have written a narrative that holds together, and I won’t be rearranging it in any significant way.”
Most of the work of new writers is to figure out how they best hammer out the skeleton: whether through the inspirational and copious bloodletting known as “getting it all on the page” followed by major manuscript surgery (as I do) or by thinking hard and writing from an outline that’s been a few months or even years in the making and then filling in the prescribed scenes and details (my friend Nick Kaufmann
writes his fantastic urban-sorcerous crime novels this way). Professional writers are really good at knowing when a skeleton is unfinished. They are slaves to the feeling that “something isn’t right here.” And they will tweak and cut and rearrange until it feels “finished.”
Before sending out that “finished” story, they polish that filled out skeleton. This is where you edit your own writing. You choose better verbs. You cut characters that steal scenes for no good reason. After you absolutely know the frame of your story (Victor LaValle
has some great things to say in interviews about this) you go through and “fix” — whittle down scenes that are too long, add descriptions so that scenes don’t happen in empty rooms with blank walls unless they’re supposed to.
This sounds so obvious, right? So why do writing students so often send out stories in the middle of the Creative phase? Teachers of writing often have to select the scenes to cut and mark where the story actually “begins”.
A great editor I recently worked with agreed with Victor that you can write your outline AFTER the novel is written, but you still have to have an outline. Every story has to have a skeleton that makes sense and that can be filled in (with scenes that function…like organs?) and can be overlaid with details (skin, eye color, hair?)… despite my extended Halloween-induced metaphor, I do think that the skeleton of the story is important, and the creation of this core of every narrative should be thought of as a separate action from the polishing (finding the perfect words, describing the perfect weather, adding the crazy character traits that will make Mr. Blusty an unforgettable professor of science) — but I also hold that the polishing of the story is NOT the editing of the story, because polishing is still fun. It’s making your story all shiny and glimmery and yours.
The editing is the painful part. After you already think the story is perfect. “As good as you can make it” – you give it to your trusted readers. Then your agent. Finally, professional editors. Each of these rounds will give you feedback which you can opt to use or not – but which you MUST look at with a critical eye. Not your inspired, vulnerable, genius writer self. A critical, consumer, teacher, word-count, sort of eye. And that is editing. Editing hurts. It’s letting go of the paragraph you kept in (though you kind of knew it should go, certainly you moved it six different places)…
So what do you think of my three-part writing process?